Summary
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Great Wednesday to you Mr. [Name]!
I am happy to hear that your voice is back and you are feeling better now than the past few days.
Keep it up and stay healthy.
Take good care of your health.
And thank you also for sending the outline of our topic today.
if you have time, please review the corrections too.
Thanks a bunch!
See you again tomorrow!
Take care!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
In today\'s dialogue, the man is either lazy or he really loves his work.
>> correct!
If he really loves his job, he is enjoying his work as his hobby.
>> correct!
So, his wife suggests that he have another hobby such as exercise or mentally active or else you will become a real bore.
>> So, his wife suggests that he has to another hobby such as exercising or becoming mentally active or else he will get bored.
And she asks him to join a bowling league.
>> correct!
Then he answers \"Why don\'t you join the my best hobby sitting around the house together.\"
>> Then he answered, \"Why don\'t you join me and do my best hobby which is sitting around the house together.\"
In today\'s dialogue the man is considering about opening his own business by using internet.
>> In today\'s dialogue the man is considering about opening his own business by using the internet.
But his plan seems to be unrealizable.
>> correct!
After listening to his plan, she shows sarcastic reaction
>> After listening to his plan, she showed a sarcastic reaction.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.