Summary

Hello there again Mr. [Name]!

Thanks for sending your composition.
And if you have time, please review the  corrections I have written below.
Thanks a lot for today.
I enjoyed our discussion during our class today.
Thanks a lot for the participation.
See you again tomorrow.

God bless!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Today\'s dialogue seems to be a conversation between a husband and a wife.

>> correct!
 When the man tries to eat something before going to the bad, Her wife restrains his behavior with some scientific resons.

>> When the man tried to eat something before going to bed, his wife restrained hi behavior saying some scientific reasons.
 She says \"As we get older, our metabolism changes.

>> She said, \"As we get older, our metabolism changes.

So we don\'t burn off as much fat as we used to.

>> correct!

If you eat apple and go directly to the bad, It will turn to fat.\"

>> If you eat an apple and go directly to bed, it will turn into fats.\"
 I can guess through the text he smoked and drinked before .

>> correct! 

>> or: I can guess through the text that he was smoking and drinking before.
 After all, He can just drinke a glass of water insted of apple.

>> After, he can just drink a glass of water instead of eating and apple.
 Issue 12 dialogus is a conversantion between the woman and the man who has bad habits such as smoking and drinking.

>> The dialogue in Issue 12 is a conversation between a man and a woman where the man has bad habits such as smoking and drinking.
 They seem to be late.

>> correct!

So, the woman asks him to hurry up.

>> So the woman asked him to hurry up.

Then the man trys to smoke with saying like this.

>> The man is trying to smoke and he said.

Smoking makes me more concentrate when I drive.

>> \"Smoking makes me to concentrate more when I am driving.\"
 The woman says \"Your talks are not really true.

>> The woman said, \"What you said is not true.\"  

That is indeed a misconception.

>> correct!

Nicotine is actually a stimulant, it makes us more nervous, not more relaxed\"

>> correct!
 Then, he answers like this, \"How do you know that even though you are a nonsmoker

>> correct!