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2014-03-26 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Today's dialogue is a conversation between the man and the woman. The man seems to be a retired pro athlete. He does not want to be invaded his privacy. Because pro athletes are always the center of attention. After he retired, People seem to forget about him. And he also have not played tennis at all After a long talk, they decided to get some exercise. Yesterday, The prosecutor’s office where has the elevator that I’m managing was lunched. So I was asked to stand by there Because the current Attorney-General was planning on visiting there. When that elevator was installed, there were many problems. And it took a while to solve those problems. So, The staff in that structure wondered if VIP were confined in the elevator. I was at there during the ceremony.

강사 첨삭

Great Wednesday morning Mr. [Name]!

I guess that you had a long day yesterday basing on what you have told me.
I hope that you work went well.
Hope that you will have a good day too today.
Thanks for actively participating though you are tired.
See you again tomorrow!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


Today\'s dialogue is a conversation between the man and the woman. 

>> correct!
 The man seems to be a retired pro athlete.

>> correct!
 He does not want to be invaded his privacy. 

>> He does not want his privacy to be invaded.
 Because pro athletes are always the center of attention.

>> correct!
 After he retired, People seem to forget about him. 

>> correct!
 And he also have not played tennis at all

>> correct!
 After a long talk, they decided to get some exercise.
>> correct!
Yesterday, The prosecutor’s office where has the elevator that I’m managing was lunched.

>> Yesterday, the elevator in the prosecutor\'s office, where I am managing, was launched.

So I was asked to stand by there

>> correct!
 Because the current Attorney-General was planning on visiting there.

>> Because the current Attorney-general was planning to visit there.
 When that elevator was installed, there were many problems. 

>> correct! 
 And it took a while to solve those problems.

>> correct!
 So, The staff in that structure wondered if VIP were confined in the elevator.

>> So the staff in the building wondered if the VIP\'s were confined in the elevator.
 I was at there during the ceremony.

>> I was there during the ceremony.

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