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2014-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

In today’s dialogue, The man and the woman are talking about crime and punishment and how we can solve this matter. The man’s thought is that criminal should be severely punished. He insists that if a criminal is behind bars for long stretches at a time, he is not going to commit any crimes for a while. Then, we are safe from crime. On the other hand, woman mentioned about the rising of prison costs. Then, the man said, they should make the money for their own cost by working in prison. My responsibility of apartment electricity failed yesterday.

강사 첨삭

Hello again Mr. [Name]!

What do you mean you failed in your responsibility?
You mean you were not able to fix? or to pay? your apartment electricity?

Which is which?

Anyway, whatever it is, as I told you, today is another day so you can make up for everything which had happened yesterday.
You can do better things today than yesterday.

So have a nice day today and just think positive.
See you tomorrow!

Take care!

Always,
Kathrine ^^


In today’s dialogue, The man and the woman are talking about crime and punishment and how we can solve this matter.

>>  correct!
>> or:
In today\'s dialogue, the man and the woman are talking about crime and punishment and how this matter could be solved.
 The man’s thought is that criminal should be severely punished. 

>>  The man thought that the criminals should be severely punished.
 He insists that if a criminal is behind bars for long stretches at a time, he is not going to commit any crimes for a while. 

>>  He insisted that if a criminal is behind bars for a long stretch of time, he is not going to commit any crimes for a while.
 Then, we are safe from crime. 

>> correct! 

>> Then we will be safe from crimes.
 On the other hand, woman mentioned about the rising of prison costs.

>>  On the other hand, the woman mentioned about the rising of prison costs.
 Then, the man said, they should make the money for their own cost by working in prison.
>>  Then the man said that they should make their own money by working in prison.
 My responsibility of apartment electricity failed yesterday.

>>  My responsibility to fix the apartment electricity failed yesterday.

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