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2014-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

학생이 쓴 원문

Today’s article talks about our attitude toward mess madia. Arguably we are living in the information Age. So, We can get a lot of knowledge from various sources such as books, newspapers, magazines, television, radio and the Web. But we are not sure which is true story. And we tend to believe what we read. So the author emphasizes the important of keeping a skeptical, critical attitude toward mess medias. We are living in the information age. The mess media can be divided into two part, print and electronic media. Without a doubt, The printed makes our sense more impressive. To understand printed media such as newspaper or magazines we need to use our imagination. On the other hand, The electronic media does not need to do that. Those of things are very intuitive and delivered and televised more quickly than printed media. So we have to keep a skeptical and critical attitude toward what we are watching.

강사 첨삭

Good morning again Mr. [Name]!
The use of words are good but there are a few mistakes on spelling.
But the thought is really comprehensive enough.
See you again tomorrow!
Take care!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Today’s article talks about our attitude toward mess madia.
>> correct! (spelling correction-mass media)
Arguably we are living in the information Age.

>> correct!
So, We can get a lot of knowledge from various sources such as books, newspapers, magazines, television, radio and the Web.

>> correct!  
But we are not sure which is true story.

>> But we are not sure which story is true.
And we tend to believe what we read.

>> And we tend to believe to what we read.
So the author emphasizes the important of keeping a skeptical, critical attitude toward mess medias.

>> So the author emphasizes the importance of keeping a skeptical, critical attitude towards the mass media. 
We are living in the information age.

>> correct!
The mess media can be divided into two part, print and electronic media.

>> The mass media can be divided into 2 parts such as the print and electronic media.
Without a doubt, The printed makes our sense more impressive.

>> correct!
To understand printed media such as newspaper or magazines we need to use our imagination.

>> correct!
On the other hand, The electronic media does not need to do that.

>> correct!
Those of things are very intuitive and delivered and televised more quickly than printed media.

>> Those things are very intuitive, delivered and televised more quickly than the printed media.
So we have to keep a skeptical and critical attitude toward what we are watching.

>> correct!

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