Summary ~~
학생이 쓴 원문
Today's article is about very interesting story about a certain beverage company's extreme advertising strategy.
Otsuka a Japanese beverage company is planning to send a 1-kilotram titanum can filled with powdered sport drink to the moon.
This extreme advertisement will be done next year in October.
Otsuka says this ridiculous plan is designed to inspire more young people to become astronauts and scientists.
But I am sure that is not true.
They must have wanted to boost their sale through this event.
Through this extremely expensive event they can attain huge a mount of attention from public. The person who hear this event from article are tempted to buy beverage which will be sent to the moon.
Anyway, I think that Otsuka has already succeeded somewhat. Because this extremely expensive event is written in the article and public can be aware of the name of Pocari Sweat.
강사 첨삭
Hello again Mr. [Name]!
Thanks for today and for sending you summary about out topic.
As I told you a while ago, very well said.
See you again next week.
Take care and have a great weekend!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Today\'s article is about very interesting story about a certain beverage company\'s extreme advertising strategy.
>> Today;s article is about a very interesting story about a certain beverage company\'s extreme advertising strategy.
Otsuka a Japanese beverage company is planning to send a 1-kilotram titanum can filled with powdered sport drink to the moon.
>> correct!
This extreme advertisement will be done next year in October.
>> correct!
Otsuka says this ridiculous plan is designed to inspire more young people to become astronauts and scientists.
>> correct!
But I am sure that is not true.
>> correct!
They must have wanted to boost their sale through this event.
>> correct!
Through this extremely expensive event they can attain huge a mount of attention from public.
>> Through this extremely expensive event they can attain huge a mount of attention from the public.
The person who hear this event from article are tempted to buy beverage which will be sent to the moon.
>> A person who can hear this event from the article will be tempted to buy the beverage which will be sent to the moon.
Anyway, I think that Otsuka has already succeeded somewhat.
>> Anyway, I think Otsuka has somewhat succeeded.
Because this extremely expensive event is written in the article and public can be aware of the name of Pocari Sweat.
>> Because this extremely expensive event is written in the article and the public will be made aware of the name of Pocari Sweat.
Thanks for today and for sending you summary about out topic.
As I told you a while ago, very well said.
See you again next week.
Take care and have a great weekend!
Always,
Kathrine ^^
Today\'s article is about very interesting story about a certain beverage company\'s extreme advertising strategy.
>> Today;s article is about a very interesting story about a certain beverage company\'s extreme advertising strategy.
Otsuka a Japanese beverage company is planning to send a 1-kilotram titanum can filled with powdered sport drink to the moon.
>> correct!
This extreme advertisement will be done next year in October.
>> correct!
Otsuka says this ridiculous plan is designed to inspire more young people to become astronauts and scientists.
>> correct!
But I am sure that is not true.
>> correct!
They must have wanted to boost their sale through this event.
>> correct!
Through this extremely expensive event they can attain huge a mount of attention from public.
>> Through this extremely expensive event they can attain huge a mount of attention from the public.
The person who hear this event from article are tempted to buy beverage which will be sent to the moon.
>> A person who can hear this event from the article will be tempted to buy the beverage which will be sent to the moon.
Anyway, I think that Otsuka has already succeeded somewhat.
>> Anyway, I think Otsuka has somewhat succeeded.
Because this extremely expensive event is written in the article and public can be aware of the name of Pocari Sweat.
>> Because this extremely expensive event is written in the article and the public will be made aware of the name of Pocari Sweat.
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