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2014-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kathrine

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Samsung Electronics and well known book retailer Barnes and Noble decided to team up. They are expecting that the affiliation between two companys will create the synergy of Samsung’s hard ware compatitiveness and Barnes and Noble’s book contents. Samsung Electronics is going to provide the hard ware for E-book with Barnes and Noble that is well known book retailer in U.S.’ And Barnes and Noble is going to affiliate with Samsung Electronic through provading E-Book contents. The reason why they decided to cooperate is to cope with the huge company Amazon. Recently, Amazon has adopted more aggressive marketing strategies for its “Kindle” products and its e book contents. Because of “kindle fire” The firm’s sale in the four quarter last year nosedived. The article said that Samsung’s tablet PC share stood at 22.6 percent in the first quarter this year. This share is not that low compared to Apple’s share 28.9 percent in the same period.

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Great morning Mr. [Name]!
Thanks for this comprehensive summary.
I know that you have prepared for it very well.
So see you for our next discussion on Monday!
Enjoy your weekend and take care!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Samsung Electronics and well known book retailer Barnes and Noble decided to team up.
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Samsung Electronics and a well known book retailer Barnes and Noble decided to team up.
They are expecting that the affiliation between two companys will create the synergy of Samsung’s hard ware compatitiveness and Barnes and Noble’s book contents.

>>  They are expecting that the affiliation between two companies will create the synergy of Samsung\'s hard ware competitiveness and Barnes and Noble\'s book contents.
Samsung Electronics is going to provide the hard ware for E-book with Barnes and Noble that is well known book retailer in U.S.

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