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Today’s article is about meeting between Chinese president Zi and Korea top management of electrical conglomerate.
>> Today\'s article is about the meeting between Chinese president Zi and the Korea top management of an electrical conglomerate.
Xi is planning to visit Korea from July 3 to 4 for a summit with Korean president Park Geun-hye.
>> correct!
The article says that he is going to visit Samsung heir apparent Lee Jae-yong at SIM.
>> correct!
SIM stands for Samsung Innovation Museum.
>> correct!
Samsung has requested Chinese president to meet their management repeatedly.
>> Samsung has requested the Chinese president to meet their management repeatedly.
Thanks for the repeated requests by Samsung, They have a chance to meet the president who is largest marketable country’s president.
>> Thanks for the repeated requests by Samsung, they have a chance to meet the president who is the largest marketable country\'s president.
The reason why Samsung was elaborating Chinese president’s visit is because China is the number one invested country for Samsung.
>> The reason why Samsung was elaborating the Chinese presidents\' visit is because China is the number one country for Samsung to invest to.
So, Samsung has been consistent in strengthening it’s relationship with Chinese government officials and prominent business leaders.
>> correct!
Because Samsung is also facing criticism over labor conditions on the mainland like the Apple that is the number one smartphone company.
>> Because Samsung is also facing criticisms over labor conditions on the mainland like that of Apple which is the number one smartphone company.
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