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Title: National health insurance to offer greater coverage for pregnancy and childbirth.
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Korea is the lowest birthrate in the world.
>> Korea has the lowest birthrate in the world.
The ministry of health and welfare said it\'ll give the graded incentive to all pregnancy form 200 to 900 dollar.
>> The Ministry of Health and Welfare said it\'ll give the graded incentive to all pregnancies from 200 to 900 dollars.
This is because the authotories encourages the women through a childbirth grant policy but they don\'t want to have over two children.
>> This is because the authorities encourage women through a childbirth grant policy, but they don\'t want to have more than two children.
Bringing up the only one child has a lot of money until adult.
>> Bringing up just one child requires much money until s/he grows into an adult.
It coasts over one hundred millin for a child because of the fee of private education.
>> It costs over one hundred million for a child because of the fee for private education.
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