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2017-09-01 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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Coffee may increase cravings for sweet treats. In USA, reseachers said people drinking coffee want to eat some sweet thinks like cakes and cookies because caffeine keeps your brain from sending adenosine. So you want to eat sweet foods. Some report said drinking coffee reduced rick of liver cancer and the other said it is good for your health to live longer but having it with sweet foods thinks carefully.

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Coffee may increase cravings for sweet treats.

>> Correct

In USA, reseachers said people drinking coffee want to eat some sweet thinks like cakes and cookies because caffeine keeps your brain from sending adenosine.

>> In the USA, researchers said people drinking voffee want to eat some sweets like cakes and cookies because caffeine keeps your brain from sending adenosine.

So you want to eat sweet foods.

>> Correct

Some report said drinking coffee reduced rick of liver cancer and the other said it is good for your health to live longer but having it with sweet foods thinks carefully.

>> Some reports said that drinking coffee reduces the risk of liver cancer, and others said it is good for your health so you\'ll live longer. However, think carefully when you want to have it with sweets.

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