Summary of the opinion

Hello again Mr. [Name]!

I am sorry for checking your composition only at this time.

I want to say my deepest gratitude  because you extended your class with me.

I know that you have been through a lot of things and the good thing there is that you did not give up.

I will always be here to help you so no need to worry about that and it is my honor to help you.

Thanks a bunch!

May you enjoy your day-off and your free time this coming weekend.

Have a nice day!

Always,
Kathrine ^^

Merry christmas Kathrine!!
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 I hope you to spend wonderfue time with your family during Christmas.

>>  I hope you spent a wonderful time with your family during Christmas.
 The new start of our class has been started now.
>>  The  new term of our class is going to start today.
I wish to strenth my determination and decided to study with new mind.
>>  I wish to strengthen my determination and I decided to study with a new mind.
Even though, My waitting has become longer than my expectation. I am going to do my best. and I\'d just like to focus on my everyday life more,

>>  Even though I have been waiting longer than what I have expected, I am going to do my best and I would like to focus more in my everyday life.
If I will prepare more. I am sure that chances will come to me.
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So, I ask you to collect my own opinion after a long time ^^..
>>  So I am asking you to correct my composition after a long time.
God bless you.
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North Korean government has been suspected that they are running a lot of political prison camps.
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Human right associations around the world have criticized North Korea for its political prison camps.
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They are insisting that there have been committing mistreating prisons and torturing it’s citizens and holding public executions.
>>  They are insisting that there have been mistreating prisoners, torturing its citizens, and holding public executions.
Some musical was made to show the realistic display of the cruelty found in a Northern prison camp.

>>  A musical was made to show the realistic display of the cruelty found in a Northern prison camp.