Summer

Summer is a real nice season. Best thing is that you can go to the water park. You can splash the water and have a cool time with your family. Sometimes I get really scary when I ride dangerous slide with the tube. Do you enjoy going to waterpark, teacher Mayleen? You can drink cold fizzy drinks and eat ice-cream and watermelon. It has lots of water so it will help you cool down at summer.What acativities do ou enjoy doing at summer, teacher Mayleen?

Hi Emma!:) H A P P Y T U E S D A Y:p   You like winter and you like summer too. That is so unusual since these two seasons are like north and south. They\'re opposites in short. I do like going to waterparks but unfortunately I can\'t swim. I\'m scared of big slides too because they usually lead to the deep part of the pool. But with summer foods, I can\'t those to my heart\'s desire (exaggerating:p^_-)   Anyway, thank you for finding time to do this composition. You did a good job. Stay positive. Have a great evening!^__^   ~Teacher Mayleen~     Summer is a real nice season. >> Summer is a really nice season.   Best thing is that you can go to the water park. >> The best thing is that you can go to waterparks.   You can splash the water and have a cool time with your family. >> CORRECT OR: You can have fun playing in the water with your family.   Sometimes I get really scary when I ride dangerous slide with the tube. >> Sometimes I get scared to ride my tube and go through a dangerous slide.   Do you enjoy going to waterpark, teacher Mayleen? >> Do you enjoy waterparks too, teacher Mayleen? You can drink cold fizzy drinks and eat ice-cream and watermelon. >> You can drink cold, fizzy drinks and eat ice cream or watermelon.   It has lots of water so it will help you cool down at summer. >> These has lots of water content so it will help you cool down in summer.   What acativities do ou enjoy doing at summer, teacher Mayleen? >> What activities do you enjoy doing during summer, teacher Mayleen?