Summer has started

Eventually, summer has started in earnest. It is getting hotter and hotter. Yesterday, it was steaming hot. I don't like summer because I'm sensitive to the heat. Indeed, summer is the busy season in my company. There is no vacation and I usually have a lot of task. However, I don't feel like to do anything and go out anywhere. I just want to stay at home, and read a book with some coffee. Of course, I couldn't do that. Although I'm tired of hot weather, I say to myself 'don't give up! don't forget I have a familiy and responsibility to them'.

Hi! Good job with writing. Your sentences are effectively descriptive. Keep up the great work! - T. Joey -   Eventually, summer has started in earnest. >> Eventually, summer has started early. It is getting hotter and hotter. >> CORRECT Yesterday, it was steaming hot. >> CORRECT I don't like summer because I'm sensitive to the heat. >> CORRECT Indeed, summer is the busy season in my company. >> Indeed, summer is the busiest season in my company. There is no vacation and I usually have a lot of task. >> CORRECT However, I don't feel like to do anything and go out anywhere. >> However, I don't feel like doing anything and going anywhere. I just want to stay at home, and read a book with some coffee. >> I just want to stay at home and read a book with some coffee. Of course, I couldn't do that. >> CORRECT Although I'm tired of hot weather, I say to myself 'don't give up! don't forget I have a familiy and responsibility to them'. >> Although I'm tired of hot weather, I say to myself, don't give up! Don't forget I have a family and a responsibility to them'.