Summer is fast approaching. What are your plans for the summer vacation?
학생이 쓴 원문
I will go to morning swimming class and study hard for second term exam. Also, I want to play with my friends like to go to a bookstore, restaurant and so on. And during summer vacation, my mother\'s birthday also comes. So I will prepare some gift for her.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. ^_^
A rainy but exceptionally great Tuesday to you.
Thank you for finding the time to do your homework. :)
I\'m glad that you have your summer vacation planned out. I sincerely hope that you enjoy your free time with your family and friends even if you have to study hard for your exams.
I also hope that you find a really beautiful gift for your beautiful mother. <3
See you again in class later. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry
A rainy but exceptionally great Tuesday to you.
Thank you for finding the time to do your homework. :)
I\'m glad that you have your summer vacation planned out. I sincerely hope that you enjoy your free time with your family and friends even if you have to study hard for your exams.
I also hope that you find a really beautiful gift for your beautiful mother. <3
See you again in class later. ^^
Take care always.
~Teacher Charry
>> I will go to my morning swimming class and study hard for the second term exam.
Also, I want to play with my friends like to go to a bookstore, restaurant and so on.
>> Also, I want to play with my friends like go to a bookstore, restaurant and so on.
And during summer vacation, my mother\'s birthday also comes.
>> In addition, during summer vacation, my mother\'s birthday also comes.
So I will prepare some gift for her.
>> CORRECT!
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