Summer is the best season of the year.

Dear [이름],

A MAGNIFICENT Monday to you! ^.^

First and foremost, let my thank you again for doing your homework.

Frankly speaking, I found reading this composition a little bit hard.

I need to imagine what you mean in your writing.

Don\'t worry!

I totally understand it.

Anyhow, here in the Philippines, a lot of us like summertime though we don\'t have one.

We just say that it\'s summer when it\'s hot.

Many families plan to go to the beach to bonding.

The same thing applies to my family.

We can be together more when the weather is hot.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Most my friend like winter better than summer and I also like winter.

>> Most of my friends like winter better than summer, and I do, too.

>> OR: Most of my friends like winter better than summer, and I like it, too.

>> OR: Most of my friends like winter better than summer, and I also like it.

The weather has been changed a lot in 10 years around the world.

>> The weather has changed a lot in 10 years around the world.

I could bear hot weather even 5 years ago but the summer in Korea is extremely hot and humid that makes people angry and upset.

>> I could bear the hot weather even 5 years ago, but the summer in Korea is extremely hot and humid that makes people angry and upset.

Korea government carried out charge more if people use electricity the amount of base line that government created last year.

>> Korean government will carry out more charges if people use the amount of electricity higher than the baseline that the government created last year.

I heard that it was the hottest summer in the Korea history last year however people was not able to use AC at home because government\'s policy.

>> I heard that the summer last year was the hottest in Korean history. However, people wasn\'t able to use AC at home because of the government\'s policy.

>> OR: I heard that the summer last year was the hottest in Korean history. However, people wasn\'t able to use air conditioning at home because of the government\'s policy.

Everybody made a complain to the government but sadly it was not changed.

>> Everybody made a complaint to the government, but sadly, it was not changed.

Both season have an advantage that we can enjoy swimming,water leisure sports in summer and snowboard, ski in winter.

>> Both seasons have advantages. We can enjoy swimming and water leisure sports in summer and snowboarding and skiing in winter.

I think it depends on people\'s mind.

>> I think it depends on people\'s minds.

if they are ready to enjoy the season, they have a lot of things to have fun than disadvantages.

>> If they are ready to enjoy the season, they will see that there are more advantages than disadvantages.

>> OR: If they are ready to enjoy the season, they will see that there are a lot of things they can do to have fun than thinking about the disadvantages.