Summer or winter is the happiest season
학생이 쓴 원문
I think summer is happier. I hate both hot and cold, but in summer, there are colors and freshness that we do not see in other seasons. Also, in summer, we become happy right away just by experiencing something cool, and we can feel happy in it when we reminisce about summer as we go through different seasons later. I think summer is happier. Summer is easier to find or feel happiness.
강사 첨삭
I think summer is happier.
>> I think summer makes me happier.
I hate both hot and cold, but in summer, there are colors and freshness that we do not see in other seasons.
>> I dislike both hot and cold weather, but in summer, there are colors and a freshness that we don’t see in other seasons.
OR >> I dislike both hot and cold weather, but in summer, there are colors and a freshness that we don’t see in other seasons.
Also, in summer, we become happy right away just by experiencing something cool, and we can feel happy in it when we reminisce about summer as we go through different seasons later.
>> Also, in summer, we can feel happy immediately just by experiencing something cool, and later, when we look back on summer during other seasons, we can still feel that happiness.
OR >> Also, in summer, we can feel happy immediately just by experiencing something cool, and later, when we look back on summer while going through other seasons, we can still feel that happiness.
I think summer is happier.
>> I think summer brings more joy.
Summer is easier to find or feel happiness.
>> It’s easier to find and feel happiness during summer.
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