Summer time is over...

2011-04-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

Last Sunday the summer time was over. The time difference was changed 12 hours to 13 hours. I've already stayed here for 2 years and passed 2 times of summer time, but still it is really confused to me. One of my my collegue also confused the time and she did a mistake to wentout 2 hours earlier than our appointment time. Even I took a wrong bus, so that I couldn't arrive on time. It was just a fun experience to us, and we laughed a lot. Anyway last week we had reunion in Asuncion. It's been a long time we met together. I enjoyed the time in Asuncion.

강사 첨삭

Hi there! Thank you for your composition today! You did well in your sentence construction. Have a good day! T. Michelle Last Sunday the summer time was over. >> Correct.The time difference was changed 12 hours to 13 hours. >> The time difference was changed from 12 hours to 13 hours.I've already stayed here for 2 years and passed 2 times of summer time, but still it is really confused to me. >> I've been staying here for 2 years now, and 2 summer seasons have already passed, but I am still confused.One of my my collegue also confused the time and she did a mistake to wentout 2 hours earlier than our appointment time. >> One of my colleagues is also confused about the time, and she made a mistake of going out 2 hours earlier than our appointment.Even I took a wrong bus, so that I couldn't arrive on time. >> I even took the wrong bus, so I couldn't arrive on time.It was just a fun experience to us, and we laughed a lot. >> Correct.Anyway last week we had reunion in Asuncion. >> Anyway, last week we had a reunion in Asuncion.It's been a long time we met together. >> It's been a long time since we last met.I enjoyed the time in Asuncion. >> Correct.

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