Summer time is over...
학생이 쓴 원문
Last Sunday the summer time was over.
The time difference was changed 12 hours to 13 hours.
I've already stayed here for 2 years and passed 2 times of summer time, but still it is really confused to me.
One of my my collegue also confused the time and she did a mistake to wentout 2 hours earlier than our appointment time.
Even I took a wrong bus, so that I couldn't arrive on time.
It was just a fun experience to us, and we laughed a lot.
Anyway last week we had reunion in Asuncion.
It's been a long time we met together.
I enjoyed the time in Asuncion.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
Thank you for your composition today! You did well in your sentence construction. Have a good day!
T. Michelle
Last Sunday the summer time was over.
>> Correct.The time difference was changed 12 hours to 13 hours.
>> The time difference was changed from 12 hours to 13 hours.I've already stayed here for 2 years and passed 2 times of summer time, but still it is really confused to me.
>> I've been staying here for 2 years now, and 2 summer seasons have already passed, but I am still confused.One of my my collegue also confused the time and she did a mistake to wentout 2 hours earlier than our appointment time.
>> One of my colleagues is also confused about the time, and she made a mistake of going out 2 hours earlier than our appointment.Even I took a wrong bus, so that I couldn't arrive on time.
>> I even took the wrong bus, so I couldn't arrive on time.It was just a fun experience to us, and we laughed a lot.
>> Correct.Anyway last week we had reunion in Asuncion.
>> Anyway, last week we had a reunion in Asuncion.It's been a long time we met together.
>> It's been a long time since we last met.I enjoyed the time in Asuncion.
>> Correct.
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