summer vacation
학생이 쓴 원문
Go to travel to Hong Kong next month, summer vacation
It is worrying, however, did not get the English and Chinese
The journey is more worried about going it alone
If you ever go to Hong Kong?
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!Good afternoon! It’s nice to have your composition in our site. Moreover, thank you for this message. I commend you for having a good composition. Anyway, about your question, frankly speaking, I haven’t been to other countries yet. But if given a chance, I would like to visit the countries in Asia first most especially Korea, Singapore and China. Good to know that you will be travelling. That is to relax yourself also after a stressful year of working. Furthermore, just enjoy and with regards to your English, I advise you to listen to many English recordings which will help you a lot. Do more reading and watch American films too. Keep practicing and I believe that you will improve a lot. Just be patient in everything you do if you want it to happen. Nonetheless, with regards to your composition, you did great but be more careful with the capitalization of words, as well as the usage of punctuation marks in your sentences. All in all, you did a good job! Keep it up and see you later! Happy Friday [이름]! ^_^
T. Abby
summer vacation
>> Summer Vacation (Capitalize the words from your Title)
Go to travel to Hong Kong next month, summer vacation
>> I will travel to Hong Kong next month for my summer vacation.
>> I will have my summer vacation in Hong Kong next month.It is worrying, however, did not get the English and Chinese
>> I’m just a bit worried because I’m not that good in English and Chinese.
>> I just worry about not having good English and Chinese skills.
>> I just worry that I couldn’t speak well in English and Chinese.The journey is more worried about going it alone
>> I’m even much more worried because I would go there alone.
>> I’m even more worried about going there alone.If you ever go to Hong Kong?>> Have you ever been to Hongkong?
>> Have you been to Hongkong?
>> Did you ever go to Hongkong?
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