Summer vacation diary

I am interesting baseball. But I have just glove for kid. Finally I got a glove. It's not expensive glove but I was so happy. Until now I borrow friends' glove. But now I can use my own glove. Now I have my glove, I will play baseball much harder than before. Playing baseball is so funny. I like sports. So I decided to enter boxing academy. If I learn boxing I can keep my family, and my friend. It is first reason. My dream is policeman. So I have to learn about fight. That is second reason. In boxing academy I run on a treadmill, skip jump lope, and learn boxing. Boxing academy is so interesting. I'm fan of samsung lions. However I have never seen samsung lions. So it was my dream to see samsung lions. And now I achieve my dream. I went to Jamsil baseball stadium with my friends. My friends and I went to there by subway. At baseball stadium, I played baseball and started to watch game. Although samsung lions was lost, it was so interesting time. I want to go there again.

Good morning, [이름]!^^ Thank you so much for telling me about your hobbies and interests!^^ Anyhow, regarding your composition, please make sure that the same ideas come together. When you are going to write about baseball, put your thoughts all together so that your ideas will not be confusing for your reader. After writing up about baseball, then, it would be better if you move to the next topic, which is boxing, in a proper way. I will explain during our class!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ I am interesting baseball. >> I am interested in baseball. But I have just glove for kid. >>But I just had a glove for a kid. Finally I got a glove. >> Finally, I got my glove. It\'s not expensive glove but I was so happy. >> It\'s not an expensive glove but I was so happy. Until now I borrow friends\' glove. >> Before that time, I used to borrow my friends\' glove. But now I can use my own glove. >> But now, I can use my own. Now I have my glove, I will play baseball much harder than before. >> Correct Playing baseball is so funny. >>Playing baseball is so interesting/exciting.I like sports. So I decided to enter boxing academy. >> I like sports so I decided to enter a boxing academy. If I learn boxing I can keep my family, and my friend. >>If I learn boxing, I can keep my family and my friends safe. It is first reason. >> It is the main / first reason. My dream is policeman. >>My dream is to be a policeman. So I have to learn about fight. >>So I have to learn how to fight. That is second reason. >>That is the second reason.  In boxing academy I run on a treadmill, skip jump lope, and learn boxing. >> In the boxing academy, I run on a treadmill, skip and jump a rope and learn boxing. Boxing academy is so interesting. >> It is very interesting to go to the boxing academy.I\'m fan of samsung lions. >>I\'m a fan of Samsung Lions. However I have never seen samsung lions. >> However, I have never seen them yet. So it was my dream to see samsung lions. >> So it was my dream to see the samsung lions. And now I achieve my dream. >>  And I have already achieved it. I went to Jamsil baseball stadium with my friends. >> Correct My friends and I went to there by subway. >> Correct At baseball stadium, I played baseball and started to watch game. >> At the baseball stadium, I played and watched the game as well. Although samsung lions was lost, it was so interesting time. >> Although the samsung lions lost, it was still an interesting time. I want to go there again. >> Correct