Summer vacation in Thailand
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday MISS [이름]!!
I hope you are having a great time there.
Anyway, thank you for sharing something about your travel to Thailand.
I bet you really had a fun time there.
I hope you will have more memorable vacation.
See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Shanee^^,
A year ago, my husband and I went to Thailand for summer vacation.
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It remains the most exciting memory of vacations that I\'ve ever had.
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Because it was the first time that my husband and I traveled abroad together.
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Actually, we never had a honey moon.
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Most of the couples who are preparing for their marriage are usually happy but we weren\'t just that way.
>>> Most of the couples who are preparing for their marriage are usually happy but it wasn\'t like than in our case.
Many bad thins had happened to us so we had to decide to put our honeymoon off.
>>> OR: Many bad things had happened to us so we had decided to put our honeymoon off.
The following summer, we felt bad to miss our honeymoon so we planned to go to a foreign land.
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We booked a private full villa room with an ocean view, not far from downtown area in Thailand.
>>> We booked a private villa room which was overlooking the ocean and not far from the downtown area in Thailand.
We didn\'t know about the country so we joined a package tour which included free time a lot.
>>> We didn\'t know about the country so we joined a package tour which allowed a lot of free time to explore.
We went sightseeing to some famous tourist spots during the day, and after back to the villa where we stayed, we enjoyed swimming in the pool or relaxing in the spa.
>>> We went sightseeing in some famous tourist spots during the day and after going back to the villa where we stayed, we enjoyed swimming in the pool and relaxing in the spa.
The only thing I had never tried before was scuba diving.
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It was fascinating! We really had a great time there.
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