Summer vacation starts.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Today summer vacation was started.
>> Today, the summer vacation has started.
or
>> The summer vacation has started today.
But I don\'t happy because summer vacation is just for 3weeks.
>> But I\'m not happy because our summer vacation is just for 3weeks.
After 1week I may be say going to school is around the corner.
>> After a week, I might say, time to go back to school is just around the corner.
Tommorrow there will be a Mt at church.We are going to play a lot.
>> Correct >> What does it mean by MT?
On Monday to Wednesday there will be a camp at church.And there will be baseball game,too.I
>> Correct
I have to study math and science harder.
>> Correct
And I will memorize Chinese words too.
>> Correct
I will prepare mid-term to overcome my failure at specific subjects.
>> I will prepare for mid-terms to overcome my failures at specific subjects.
The weather is hotter and hotter and I have to overcome the hot weather and take care of me.
>> The weather is becoming hotter and I have to overcome this weather and take care of myself.
Summer is good for catch a cold.I really hate summer.It makes people angry.
>> Correct
But after overcome summer autumn will greet us.I can see beautiful leaves on September.
>> But after summer, autumn will greet us. I will see beautiful leaves on September.
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