Summer Vatation
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [Writing Task] What images spring to mind when you hear the expression \'summer vacation\'?
I think about swimming at the pool and go to water park.
I like to swim on \'Survival Adventure\'.
It\'s a big wave pool, and it\'s very scary and fun.
I like swimming at the pool and play!
I like swimming everything!
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, [이름]!
It\'s finally Friday! ^^,) I hope you\'re doing alright.
I\'m glad that you accomplished your homework. You did a good job here.
I have made some modifications though.
We can talk about this in class if you want to.
Have a good weekend!
__Teacher Mayleen :)
I think about swimming at the pool and go to water park.
>>> I think about swimming in the pool and going to the water park.
I like to swim on \'Survival Adventure\'.
I like to swim on \'Survival Adventure\'.
>>> I like to swim in \'Survival Adventure\'.
It\'s a big wave pool, and it\'s very scary and fun.
It\'s a big wave pool, and it\'s very scary and fun.
>>> It\'s a big wave pool and it looks scary and fun at the same time.
I like swimming at the pool and play!
I like swimming at the pool and play!
>>> I like playing in the pool.
I like swimming everything!
I like swimming everything!
>>> I like everything that\'s related to swimming.
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