Sun
학생이 쓴 원문
Theme: [ESSAY] Imagine a life without the sun. What would life be like?
I can delude my parents and friends into aliens or another scary creature.
And I can delude aliens or another scary creature into my parents and friends.
I can\'t see anything. Everything will be pitch black.
I can\'t go out and I can\'t use my cell phone and computers.
There will be a black out. We\'ll can\'t use electricities.
I can\'t imagine life without the sun!
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your edited homework, [이름]. Thanks for sending it. Catch you on Monday. Happy weekend!
Cheers,
Jean~~
Theme: [ESSAY] Imagine a life without the sun. What would life be like?
I can delude my parents and friends into aliens or another scary creature. And I can delude aliens or another scary creature into my parents and friends.
>> I can delude my parents and friends into aliens or another scary creature. (I\'m not sure if I understand these sentences correctly so let\'s talk about it on Monday.^^)
I can\'t see anything. Everything will be pitch black. I can\'t go out and I can\'t use my cell phone and computers.
>> CORRECT~~
There will be a black out. [\"Blackout\" is one word only, not 2 separate words.]
>> OR: There will be a power loss.
We\'ll can\'t use electricities.
>> We can\'t use electricity.
I can\'t imagine life without the sun!
>> CORRECT~~
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