Sun and Moon

Chidrents said laughing. "We are on the tree.If you came up, you put oil on the tree. If so it is easy to come up." The tiger found oil and put oil on the tree. But the tree is much slipper than before. The tiger fall into ground. The boy said proudly "we brought the ax, so we make the hole to step up". Th sneaky tiger laughted and broght the ax. The children recognized they were stupidl at that time and started to pray. The god heard their prays and then gave the rope with baskt to the children. The children came into the basket quickly. the basket came up to sky. The tiger also prayed to the god at the top of tree, too. The god heard its pray and gave it the rotten rope. The tiger sat on the basket and also came up to sky. But the rotten rope was cut by weight of the tiger.The tiger fell on the red millet. The tiger was hurted by sharp millet and bloody.It is why the millet field is red. As soon as the children approach to the sky, the god got the shy girl to be sun.

Hi Sohia!! Thank you for your composition. I enjoyed reading the story. ^_^ I provided you some corrections with your sentences. Please find time to review them. Have a wonderful weekend. Take care!^_^ __Teacher Nica__   Chidrents said laughing. \"We are on the tree.If you came up, you put oil on the tree. If so it is easy to come up.\" >> The children said laughing, \"We are on the tree. If you want to come up, you need to put oil on the tree so it would be easier for you to climb the tree.\". The tiger found oil and put oil on the tree. >> The tiger found an oil and rub it on the tree. But the tree is much slipper than before. >> But the tree is much slippier than before. The tiger fall into ground. >> The tiger fell into the ground. The boy said proudly \"we brought the ax, so we make the hole to step up\". >> The boy said proudly, \" We brought an ax and made a hole\". Th sneaky tiger laughted and broght the ax. >> The sneaky tiger laughed and got the ax. The children recognized they were stupidl at that time and started to pray. >> The children realized they were stupid and started to pray. The god heard their prays and then gave the rope with baskt to the children. >> God heared their prayers and gave a rope with a basket to the children. The children came into the basket quickly. >> The children went into the basket quickly. the basket came up to sky. >> The basket went up the sky. The tiger also prayed to the god at the top of tree, too. >> The tiger also prayed to God at the top of the tree too. The god heard its pray and gave it the rotten rope. >> God heared its prayer and gave a rotten rope. The tiger sat on the basket and also came up to sky. >> The tiger sat on the basket and it also went up the sky. But the rotten rope was cut by weight of the tiger. >> But the rotten rope was cut because of the heavy weight of the tiger. The tiger fell on the red millet. >> Correct! The tiger was hurted by sharp millet and bloody. >> The tiger was hurt because of the sharp millet and it was bloody. It is why the millet field is red. >> Correct! As soon as the children approach to the sky, the god got the shy girl to be sun. >> As soon as the children approached the sky, God made the shy girl to be the sun.