Sunday-1
학생이 쓴 원문
1. _How many students are in the class?
2. I don't have _much knowledge about the Internet.
3. Can you give me a few_ information?
4. Wow, what a large amount_ of money!
5. _How much time do you have?
6. I need a few _ things for my new house.
7. I like to take many_ photos.
8. Dave wants to have _ many children.
I drove my car about 4hours, so I was tired yesterday.
I went to bed early.
Anyway I want to write my story of my last weekand...
I had to go Osan city until last sunday.
Since the Chung-ju is located near by Osan.(It takes about 1hour or more)
I decided to go to my friends house which is in Chung-ju.
I have three friends in Chung ju. the one of them is not close to the others.
So I had a contact with other two friends.
I used to sleep in their house, so I felt comfortable whenever I go their house.
It was 2-years Since I haven't been there. so the location of their the house was changed.
I was waiting one of them, singing songs in a karaoke near by his place.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
Thanks for doing your homework.
I appreciate it a lot.
It\'s to hear that you went to bed early last night.
I hope that you had enough sleep.
Enjoy your weekend.
Teacher Nina
>> CORRECT
2. I don\'t have _much knowledge about the Internet.
2. I don\'t have _much knowledge about the Internet.
>> CORRECT
3. Can you give me a few_ information?
3. Can you give me a few_ information?
>> A LITTLE
4. Wow, what a large amount_ of money!
4. Wow, what a large amount_ of money!
>> CORRECT
5. _How much time do you have?
5. _How much time do you have?
>> CORRECT
6. I need a few _ things for my new house.
6. I need a few _ things for my new house.
>> CORRECT
7. I like to take many_ photos.
7. I like to take many_ photos.
>> CORRECT
8. Dave wants to have _ many children.
8. Dave wants to have _ many children.
>> CORRECT
I drove my car about 4hours, so I was tired yesterday.
I drove my car about 4hours, so I was tired yesterday.
>> I drove my car for about four hours, so I was tired yesterday.
I went to bed early.
I went to bed early.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I slept early last night.
Anyway I want to write my story of my last weekand...
Anyway I want to write my story of my last weekand...
>> Anyway, I want to tell you a story about last weekend.
>> OR: Anyway, I want to share what happened to me last weekend.
I had to go Osan city until last sunday.
I had to go Osan city until last sunday.
>> I had to go to Osan City and stay there until last Sunday.
Since the Chung-ju is located near by Osan.(It takes about 1hour or more)
Since the Chung-ju is located near by Osan.(It takes about 1hour or more)
>> Since, Chung-ju is located nearby Osan, it takes about one hour or more by car.
I decided to go to my friends house which is in Chung-ju.
I decided to go to my friends house which is in Chung-ju.
>> I decided to go to my friend\'s house which is in Chung-ju.
>> OR: I decided to go to my friend\'s house which is located in Chung-ju.
I have three friends in Chung ju. the one of them is not close to the others.
I have three friends in Chung ju. the one of them is not close to the others.
>> I have three friends who live in Chung-ju. One of them is not close to the others.
So I had a contact with other two friends.
So I had a contact with other two friends.
>> So, I had to contact my two friends.
I used to sleep in their house, so I felt comfortable whenever I go their house.
I used to sleep in their house, so I felt comfortable whenever I go their house.
>> I used to sleep in their house, so I feel comfortable whenever I go there.
It was 2-years Since I haven\'t been there. so the location of their the house was changed.
It was 2-years Since I haven\'t been there. so the location of their the house was changed.
>> It was two years since I went there so, the location of their house changed.
>> OR: It was two years since I\'ve been there so, the location of their house changed.
I was waiting one of them, singing songs in a karaoke near by his place.
I was waiting one of them, singing songs in a karaoke near by his place.
>> I was waiting one of them who was singing in a karaoke bar nearby his place.
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