Sunday-1

2014-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. _How many students are in the class? 2. I don't have _much knowledge about the Internet. 3. Can you give me a few_ information? 4. Wow, what a large amount_ of money! 5. _How much time do you have? 6. I need a few _ things for my new house. 7. I like to take many_ photos. 8. Dave wants to have _ many children. I drove my car about 4hours, so I was tired yesterday. I went to bed early. Anyway I want to write my story of my last weekand... I had to go Osan city until last sunday. Since the Chung-ju is located near by Osan.(It takes about 1hour or more) I decided to go to my friends house which is in Chung-ju. I have three friends in Chung ju. the one of them is not close to the others. So I had a contact with other two friends. I used to sleep in their house, so I felt comfortable whenever I go their house. It was 2-years Since I haven't been there. so the location of their the house was changed. I was waiting one of them, singing songs in a karaoke near by his place.

강사 첨삭

Hi there [이름]!
Thanks for doing your homework.
I appreciate it a lot. 
It\'s to hear that you went to bed early last night. 
I hope that you had enough sleep.
Enjoy your weekend.
Teacher Nina

1. _How many students are in the class?
>> CORRECT
2. I don\'t have _much knowledge about the Internet. 
>> CORRECT
3. Can you give me a few_ information?
>> A LITTLE 
4. Wow, what a large amount_ of money!
>> CORRECT
5. _How much time do you have?
>> CORRECT
6. I need a few _ things for my new house.
>> CORRECT
7. I like to take many_ photos. 
>> CORRECT
8. Dave wants to have _ many children.
>> CORRECT

I drove my car about 4hours, so I was tired yesterday.
>> I drove my car for about four hours, so I was tired yesterday. 
I went to bed early.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I slept early last night. 
Anyway I want to write my story of my last weekand...
>> Anyway, I want to tell you a story about last weekend.
>> OR: Anyway, I want to share what happened to me last weekend.  

I had to go Osan city until last sunday.
>> I had to go to Osan City and stay there until last Sunday. 
Since the Chung-ju is located near by Osan.(It takes about 1hour or more)
>> Since, Chung-ju is located nearby Osan, it takes about one hour or more by car.
I decided to go to my friends house which is in Chung-ju.
>> I decided to go to my friend\'s house which is in Chung-ju.
>> OR: I decided to go to my friend\'s house which is located in Chung-ju.
I have three friends in Chung ju. the one of them is not close to the others.
>> I have three friends who live in Chung-ju. One of them is not close to the others. 
So I had a contact with other two friends.
>> So, I had to contact my two friends. 
I used to sleep in their house, so I felt comfortable whenever I go their house.
>> I used to sleep in their house, so I feel comfortable whenever I go there. 
It was 2-years Since I haven\'t been there. so the location of their the house was changed.
>> It was two years since I went there so, the location of their house changed. 
>> OR: It was two years since I\'ve been there so, the location of their house changed. 
I was waiting one of them, singing songs in a karaoke near by his place.
>> I was waiting one of them who was singing in a karaoke bar nearby his place. 

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