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I have had a cold since last thursday. In addition, I have sore throat, today. I can't understand why I have a cold in summer. It hasn't air conditioner in my house. I have a fan, however fan is turned off at night. And I slept under a blanket, though it is flimsy.
Korean says even the dog don't have a summer cold. But I have a cold in summer almost every summer. I wonder why I have a cold every summer. Then I become to think I may have weak immunity. I don't really believe that, but I irritated to have a cold.
I will be thankful cold is not serious for my mental health. To forget pain of throat, I have to concentrate something. It is good if I study, but I played game. The game was simple and easy but It was in English. Therefore I din't have guilty conscience.
강사 첨삭
Hi Isabelle,
Hmm I’m so sorry about that, I want to suggest
you to take some vitamins to strengthen your
immune system. I’m sure it’ll be helpful
Here are the corrections
See you and stay safe,
T. Connie
I have had a cold since last thursday.
>> I had a cold since last Thursday.
In addition, I have sore throat, today.
>> In addition to that, I’m having a sore throat today.
I can't understand why I have a cold in summer.
>> Correct^^
It hasn't air conditioner in my house.
>> I don’t have an air conditioner in my house.
>> I don’t have an air conditioner at home.
I have a fan, however fan is turned off at night.
>> I have a fan but I turn it off at night.
And I slept under a blanket, though it is flimsy.
>> I sleep under a blanket, though it is flimsy. Korean says even the dog don't have a summer cold.
>> Correct^^
But I have a cold in summer almost every summer.
>> However, I catch a cold almost every summer.
I wonder why I have a cold every summer.
>> Correct^^
>> I wonder why I catch a cold every summer.
Then I become to think I may have weak immunity.
>> Correct^^
I don't really believe that, but I irritated to have a cold.
>> I don’t believe that, but I’m irritated and tired having colds. I will be thankful cold is not serious for my mental health.
>> I am thankful that cold is not so serious affecting my health.
To forget pain of throat, I have to concentrate something.
>> To forget or ease the pain in my throat, I have to concentrate in doing some other things.
It is good if I study, but I played game.
>> Correct
The game was simple and easy but It was in English.
>> The game was simple and easy but the instructions are in English.
Therefore I din't have guilty conscience.
>> Therefore I wouldn’t be guilty, I still have a clear conscience playing it.
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