Sunday
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day to you [이름]!
You are really maximizing all of the resources available to enhance your vocabulary skills. Great!
Keep on reading books, articles, newspapers and so on.
Don\'t forget to use the words you encounter everyday.
Speak in English often. ^^ Talk to you very soon.
Take Care! I hope that you will have a great day today.
Teacher Nina
1. I\'m not capable _ that type of behavior.
of
>> Correct!
2. Smoking is bad _ you.
for
>> Correct!
3. I\'m so angry _ this!
with
>> Correct!
4. We\'re not associated _ that company.
with
>> Correct!
5. She was dressed _ pink.
on
>> in pink
I expected to come Sunday morning.
>> I expected Sunday morning to come.
because of the semifinal of the world
cup.
>> Because of the semi finals of World Cup.
I woke up at the 6 AM.
>> Correct!
The game was very big match : Netherland
versus Brazil.
>> The game was a very big match: Netherland versus Brazil.
Brazil loose the game and Netherland became a No.3 in the
world.
>> Brazil lost the game and Netherland became the ranked the third in the world.
After watching the match.
>> Correct!
I tried to read a book at 8 am.
>> Correct!
However suddenly I fell a sleep because of fatigue from tennis which I
played yesterday.
>> However, I suddenly fell asleep because of fatigue from playing tennis.
and I got up in the noon and met Carolyn.
>> I got up at noon and met Carolyn.
We went to
restaurant and ate lunch
>> We went to a restaurant and ate lunch.
It\'s on a 50% sale so we just paid discounted
price.
>> It was on 50 % off so we just paid half of the price.
After enjoying our meal, we went to library because I want to
borrow some books and we fell a sleep in the library...we left the
library at 5 PM.
>> After our meal. we went to the library because I wanted to borrow some books. We fell asleep in the library and left at 5 p.m.
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