Sunday moring. 2
학생이 쓴 원문
1. The woman.... by the table is his sister, not his mother.
C. standing
2. "I'm just going out for an ice cream - .............get one for you too?'' 'That would be nice of you!'
B. Shall I
3. When you come back, don't forget ..... The post.
C. to pick up
4. That was a horrible thing to say. I think you ........ apologise
D. ought to
5. I'll never stop.....you
C. loving
However, It wasn't much time when someone who will share this room came in.
He is major. so I felt little uncomfortable. even now I feel uncomfortable,
Because of his grade. He is talkative person and out going. He seemed like know every thing. but I don't know he wanted to be seemed like to know everything.
But he is good man and kind person. Maybe we can be a good friend. eventhough I don't like to talk much time with him.
강사 첨삭
Hello there!
You made me smile because of your story at the last part of this composition.
I konw that you are a friendly person. Hihihi! Just make friends. ^^
You can help each other in the future. I know that you can learn something from him and he can learn a lot of things from you. ^_^
Thanks for always allotting some time to do your essays. Teacher Nina
1. The woman.... by the table is his sister, not his mother. C. standing
>> Correct!2. \"I\'m just going out for an ice cream - .............get one for you too?\'\' \'That would be nice of you!\' B. Shall I >> Correct!
3. When you come back, don\'t forget ..... The post. C. to pick up
>> Correct!
4. That was a horrible thing to say. I think you ........ apologise D. ought to
>> Correct! 5. I\'ll never stop.....you C. loving
>> Correct!However, It wasn\'t much time when someone who will share this room came in.
>> Did you mean: However, it didn\'t take a lot of time until someone came to share the room with me. He is major.
>> He is a major.
so I felt little uncomfortable. even now I feel uncomfortable,
>> So I feel uncomfortable until now. Because of his grade.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Because of his position.He is talkative person and out going.
>> He is a talkative and outgoing person. He seemed like know every thing.
>> He seems like he know everything.
but I don\'t know he wanted to be seemed like to know everything.
>> Did you mean: But I don\'t know if he is just showing that he likes to know everything. But he is good man and kind person.
>> But he is a good man and a kind person.
Maybe we can be a good friend. eventhough I don\'t like to talk much time with him.
>> Maybe we can be good friends eventhoug I don\'t like talking to him.
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