Sunday moring.

2014-07-28 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. "But I will have ___ more this evening," he added. some 2. I went to the butcher, but I didn't buy ___ meat. It was so expensive! any 3. Please come to see me __ time you are free. any 4. Thank you. Maybe I will come ___ time on Saturday? some 5. I have no cigarettes left so I will go to the store to buy ___. some Sunday morning, two weeks ago, I returned home and took a rest. My Father gave me some money to refuel my car. I have a business trip to DEA JEON. So I packed up my backpack. One of my friend have same destination so I gave him a ride to the place he wanted to. While I was driving, he talked a lot of things to me. that story was really exciting. most of stories were related to his part time job experiences. it was not only fun but also beneficial for me. At last I told farewell to my friend. and I arrived at the education place. I enrolled and received room key. I thought I was the one who can use the room alone.

강사 첨삭

Good evening [이름]! Wow! Thanks for doing a lot of homework today. I am so happy to read your ideas in writing. Your grammar homework is doing well. Keep it up! More practices for writing skill. Keep on elaborating your ideas. Talk to you tomorrow. Teacher Nina   1. \"But I will have ___ more this evening,\" he added. some >> Correct! 2. I went to the butcher, but I didn\'t buy ___ meat. It was so expensive!any >> Correct! 3. Please come to see me __ time you are free.any >> Correct! 4. Thank you. Maybe I will come ___ time on Saturday? some >> Correct! 5. I have no cigarettes left so I will go to the store to buy ___.some >> Correct! Sunday morning, two weeks ago, I returned home and took a rest. >> On a Sunday morning two weeks ago, I went home and took a rest. My Father gave me some money to refuel my car. >> Correct! I have a business trip to DEA JEON. >> I went on a business trip to Daejeon. So I packed up my backpack. >> So I packed my things on my backpack. One of my friend have same destination so I gave him a ride to the place he wanted to. >> One of my friends have the same destination so I gave him a ride to the place he wanted to. >> OR: One of my friends needs to go the same destination so I offered him a ride. While I was driving, he talked a lot of things to me. >> While I was driving, he told me a lot of things. that story was really exciting. >> The story was really exciting. most of stories were related to his part time job experiences. >> Most of the stories were related to his part time job experiences. it was not only fun but also beneficial for me. >> Correct! At last I told farewell to my friend. >> At last, I bid goodbye to my friend.and I arrived at the education place. >> Correct! I enrolled and received room key. >> I enrolled and received the key of my room. I thought I was the one who can use the room alone. >> I thought I was the only one who can use the room.

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