Sunny after cloudy
학생이 쓴 원문
In the morning, today is cloudy.
After lunch, today is sunny.
I bright my eyes by strong sunlight.
I'm heard sounds of cicada.
I'm happy because the mountain close to me.
My house is just below the mountain.
강사 첨삭
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In the morning, today is cloudy.>> It was cloudy in the morning.After lunch, today is sunny.>> But after lunch, it's sunny.I bright my eyes by strong sunlight.>> The sunlight is so strong and bright that it hurts my eyes.I'm heard sounds of cicada.>> I can hear the sound of cicada.I'm happy because the mountain close to me.>> I'm happy because the mountain is so close to me.My house is just below the mountain.
>> My house is just at the foot of the mountain.
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