sunshine

Today it’s cleared and bright. Sun is shinning like burning. Sun light shinning over the leaves looks like glittering gold. It seems that the world changed into a quite different world. God’s grace is wonderful and amazing! I saw the fig tree which I planted its sapling the last year. The tree now is thick with its leaves but no fruit. This reminds me of the Bible story that the fig tree which was cursed by Jesus. Its thick leaves’ shadow over the other plant hinders them to grow. So I decided to prune its leaves properly to make the other plants share the sun beam.

Hello, Louis!! Wow!  What an impressive poem. Keep doing more! Today it’s cleared and bright. Sun is shinning like burning.>>>Today, it's clear and bright.  The sun is shining like it is burning. Sun light shinning over the leaves looks like glittering gold. >>>The sunlight that shines the leaves looks like glittering gold. It seems that the world changed into a quite different world.  >>>correct!! God’s grace is wonderful and amazing!  >>>correct!! I saw the fig tree which I planted its sapling the last year.  >>>I saw the fig tree which I planted last year. The tree now is thick with its leaves but no fruit.  >>>The tree has thick leaves but has not bear a fruit. This reminds me of the Bible story that the fig tree which was cursed by Jesus.  >>>This reminds me of the Bible story of the fig tree which was cursed by Jesus. Its thick leaves’ shadow over the other plant hinders them to grow.  >>>correct!! So I decided to prune its leaves properly to make the other plants share the sun beam. >>>correct!!