Supernatural abilities
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there sir,
There are many unexplained things in the world. Scientists are trying their best to explain things. But a lot of mysteries still happen even in the modern world. Maybe, you are right in saying that supernatural abilities is related to spirituality. Excellent job as usual sir. You are a superb writer! See you on Wednesday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
There are a lot of mysterious things in the world.
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Someone saw the ghost, the dead came to life again, there is a ghost in the body of someone, someone see the future of his own, and so on.
>>Someone saw a ghost, the dead came to life again, there is a ghost in the body of someone, someone sees his own future, and so on.
NOTE: If a ghost enters someone else\'s body that is called being POSSESSED.
The best of supernatural abilities is the maternal instinct.
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The supernatural ability is already well known.
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When a baby was under the car, his mother lifted in a flash the heavy car.
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How could we explain the fact. I can\'t explain it except supernatural ability.
>>How could we explain that fact. I can\'t explain it except saying it\'s a supernatural ability.
We can see a supernatural ability in the religious man.
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Maybe they had ever been much a spritual experience than other people.
>>Maybe they had more spiritual experience compared to other people.
Therefore, supernatural ability is related to the spirituality.
>>Therefore, supernatural ability is related to spirituality.
If common people develop very well his spirituality, he will be take the supernatural ability.
>>If common people develop their spirituality well, they could have supernatural ability.
What do you think about my conclusion?
>>correct!
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