Superstition

Dear sir [이름],

Wow! so you are into superstitions, myths and history too? I personally find these things interesting too. Superstitions has been a part of the world since the world began I think.  I believe if we dig more into it, we can find how it started then it turns into history. Let\'s talk more about this in class. See you.

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I am very interest about superstition and myths and history.

>>I am very interested about superstitions, myths and history.

Next year I have a plan to write a book about that.

>>Next year, I have a plan to write a book about that.

The title of the book is a Between myth and history.

>> The book will be entitled \'Between Myth and History\'.

Myth has been greatly with the element of superstition.

>>Myth has been greatly influenced with the element of superstition.

Because there is no record and no evidence.

>>correct!

It is important historical event that myth is turned into history.

>>It is important that historical events in myths be turned into history.

The Trojan War had only been record, Archaeologists didn\'t have discovered historical sites.

>> The Trojan War had only been recorded but archaeologists didn\'t discover historical sites for evidence.

At the turn of 19th century, it had been finally find out the remains.

>>At the turn of the 19th century, the remains had been finally found out.

It is moment that Trojan War turned into history.

>>It was the moment when the Trojan War turned into history.

Before that, it is talkative that it is superstition and it is just myth.

>> Before that, it was just a superstition or a myth.

I think the basis of the history is myth and legend.

>>correct!

Especially superstition is also somewhat false.

>>Superstition is also somewhat false.

A superstition is may not true and can not be identified by the fact.

>> A superstition may not be true since it is not based on facts.

But a lot of people strongly believe it for a long time.

>>correct!

Gradually people accept as a fact.

>>Gradually, people accepted it as a fact.

One day, If it finds a similar incident, it starts to record as a myth.

>>One day, if it finds a similar incident, it is started to be recorded as a myth.

The next stage, it becomes a history.

>>correct!