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My dear precious and thankful teacher Kristel! First of all, you don't have to proofread these sentencse below. One of my friend who live in the USA help my artice's translation job. I just want to know these sentencese below are natual or not. ---------------------------- This paper conducted a comparison test on connection speed between the proposal method under Wi-Fi conditions and existing smartphone application. As a result of comparing the connection speed of each account logged-in following the user verification until connecting to the home directory, the proposed method showed a better performance in terms of security and convenience. (measuring from the time the authentication for user log-in begins until the time of completed connection to home directory). Besides, the test findings verified that the proposed method that reinforced user authentication shows little difference in speed from the existing method. To compare connection speed by place, this study divided the place into indoor and outdoor and proceeded with a test. As Wi-Fi speed may vary by hour, the final average was calculated after performing the measurement every two hours between 9am and 9pm. As for the indoor, the existing method and proposed method are 2.1 seconds apart under Wi-Fi communication conditions, as shown in the figure 11, whereas the outdoor is 1.5 seconds apart. Regarding the proposed method, one can check it shows little difference in speed even though the security was tightened up using the 2-factor user authentication. In case of simultaneously accessing files in different areas, an effective way of handling data is needed for file compatibility. Future research plan includes moving one-step forward to enable an effective information sharing and analysis using a cloud robot.

Hello there Ma\'am!! A pleasant afternoon to you... I\'ve read the translation and I think this is the same as the other day, right? While reading it, my understanding of this translation and the one I read in the past are different in some ways. As much as I really want to comment on this, I guess I am not in the position to do so because I don\'t know exactly what the whole scenario of the paper is. All I know is that there is a slight discrepancy of what I just read now and the one I read a few days ago. Kindly enlighten me with this during the class tomorrow so as for me to be able to judge it properly because I don\'t really want to jump into conclusions without clarifying things first. ^^ I hope you understand ma\'am! Have a great day and see you tomorrow~~ T.Kristel- My dear precious and thankful teacher Kristel!>> CORRECT!!First of all, you don\'t have to proofread these sentencse below.>> CORRECT!!One of my friend who live in the USA help my artice\'s translation job. >> One of my friends who lives in the USA helped in my artice\'s translation.I just want to know these sentencese below are natual or not.>> I just want to know whether these sentences below would sound natural or not.----------------------------This paper conducted a comparison test on connection speed between the proposal method under Wi-Fi conditions and existing smartphone                  application. As a result of comparing the connection speed of each account logged-in following the user verification until connecting to the home directory, the proposed method showed a better performance in terms of security and convenience. (measuring from the time the authentication for user log-in begins until the time of completed connection to home directory). Besides, the test findings verified that the proposed method that reinforced user authentication shows little difference in speed from the existing method. To compare connection speed by place, this study divided the place into indoor and outdoor and proceeded with a test. As Wi-Fi speed may vary by       hour, the final average was calculated after performing the measurement every two hours between 9am and 9pm. As for the indoor, the existing method and proposed method are 2.1 seconds apart under Wi-Fi communication conditions, as shown in the figure 11, whereas the outdoor is 1.5 seconds apart. Regarding the proposed method, one can check it shows little difference in speed even though the security was tightened up using the 2-factor user        authentication. In case of simultaneously accessing files in different areas, an effective way of handling data is needed for file compatibility. Future     research plan includes moving one-step forward to enable an effective information sharing and analysis using a cloud robot.