support
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That is not obligation.
Sometimes parents support too much make the children dependent more and more.
When they are young children, parents have to support and care but after they become adults they should do indendently everything including buying house ahc car etc.
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Happy Friday, Ms. [이름]!
It takes a village to raise a person. it means, there should be a balance in raising a child to make him/her a better individual in the future.
See you later :)
Aki~
That is not an obligation.
>>> CORRECT!
Sometimes parents support too much make the children dependent more and more.
>>> Sometimes too much support from parents makes the children more dependent.
When they are young children, parents have to support and care but after they become adults they should do indendently everything including buying house and car etc.
>>> When they were young children, parents have to support and care but after they become adults they should do independently everything including buying a house and car, etc.
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