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Even I, I don\'t think that children should support elderly parents because that is unreasonable and out of step with the times.
It is natural and possible times In the past like farming and feudal society.
But now is an industrial society it is too burden supporting parents on the children.
Fot the same reasons, children who become adult don\'t dependent on the parents when they getting married.
Now is imbalanced values times in Korea.
Children don\'y want to support on their parents but they naturally expect to inherit on their parents\' estate.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Ms. [이름]!
Ironically speaking, some children do not want to support their parents but expect something from them.
Sounds ridiculous, but this exists in most countries.
See you later!
Aki~
Even I, I don\'t think that children should support elderly parents because that is unreasonable and out of step with the times.
>> CORRECT!
It is natural and possible times In the past like farming and feudal society.
>>> It is natural and possible at times, like in the past, as in farming and feudal societies.
But now is an industrial society it is too burden supporting parents on the children.
>>> But now is an industrial society, it is too burden supporting parents on the children.
Fot the same reasons, children who become adult don\'t dependent on the parents when they getting married.
>>> For the same reasons, children who become adult don\'t dependent on their parents when they get married.
Now is imbalanced values times in Korea.
>>>Today, values in Korea seem to be imbalanced
Children don\'y want to support on their parents but they naturally expect to inherit on their parents\' estate.
>>> Children don\'t want to rely on their parents, but they naturally expect to inherit from their parents\' estate.
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