Supportive person who always be on my side.
학생이 쓴 원문
The adjective which best defines my friend is \'supportive\'. My best friend always be on my side and gives positive energy. Especially, when I feel depressed or anxious, she often told me that \'You can make it. I believe you\'ll achieve your dream.\' For this reason, I feel better and more energetic after meeting or having a short phone call with her. I feel I\'m really lucky person that I can have many supportive people, like my family and friends. I also want to be a supportive person to her and help her whenever she needed.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Melody!
Being able to share everything is one of the wonderful aspects about having a best friend.
They are the people we confide in about our worst blunders and anxieties that we wouldn\'t dare share with anybody else.
Thank you so much for finding time to answer your homework. I have made some modifications.
I will talk to you again tomorrow. Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
The adjective which best defines my friend is \'supportive\'.
>>> The adjective that best defines my best friend is \'supportive.\'
My best friend always be on my side and gives positive energy.
>>> My best friend is always on my side giving me positive energy.
Especially, when I feel depressed or anxious, she often told me that \'You can make it. I believe you\'ll achieve your dream.\'
>>> Especially when I feel depressed or anxious, she often tells me that \'You can make it,\' \'I believe you\'ll achieve your dream.\'
For this reason, I feel better and more energetic after meeting or having a short phone call with her.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: As a result, I feel better and more energized after meeting with her or speaking with her briefly on the phone.
I feel I\'m really lucky person that I can have many supportive people, like my family and friends.
>>> I feel I\'m a really lucky person that I can have many supportive people, like my family and friends.
I also want to be a supportive person to her and help her whenever she needed.
>>> I also want to be a supportive friend and help her whenever she needs it.
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