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Dear lei.~
I want to talk about last night to you. after work, my friend and i went to downtown. we did someting as a work. after finish it, we went to cafeteria. and we had chatting. the theme were about boyfriend(for me, it was about my ex-boy friend who i broke up with him this week. i will tell you about it in someday. but don't worry about my heart.i am very fine.^ ^), about future, about job and so on. while my friend went to toilet, i just stared out of window.
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Dear lei.~I want to talk about last night to you.
>>I want to talk about what happened last night
after work, my friend and i went to downtown.
>>Me and my friend went downtown after work.
we did someting as a work.
>>correct
after finish it, we went to cafeteria.
>>After we were finished, we went to a cafeteria
and we had chatting.
>>and we had a chat
the theme were about boyfriend(for me, it was about my ex-boy friend who i broke up with him this week.
>>Our topic was about “boyfriends” (in my case, it’s my ex-boyfriend since I broke up with him last week)
i will tell you about it in someday.
>>I will tell you about it someday
but don't worry about my heart.i am very fine.^ ^),
>>But don’t worry about my feelings, I am fine
about future, about job and so on.
>>We also talked about our future, about our job and so on.
while my friend went to toilet, i just stared out of window.
>>When my friend went to the restroom, I stared out the window
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