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2010-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Dear lei.~ I want to talk about last night to you. after work, my friend and i went to downtown. we did someting as a work. after finish it, we went to cafeteria. and we had chatting. the theme were about boyfriend(for me, it was about my ex-boy friend who i broke up with him this week. i will tell you about it in someday. but don't worry about my heart.i am very fine.^ ^), about future, about job and so on. while my friend went to toilet, i just stared out of window.

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Dear lei.~I want to talk about last night to you. >>I want to talk about what happened last night after work, my friend and i went to downtown. >>Me and my friend went downtown after work. we did someting as a work. >>correct after finish it, we went to cafeteria. >>After we were finished, we went to a cafeteria and we had chatting. >>and we had a chat the theme were about boyfriend(for me, it was about my ex-boy friend who i broke up with him this week. >>Our topic was about “boyfriends” (in my case, it’s my ex-boyfriend since I broke up with him last week) i will tell you about it in someday. >>I will tell you about it someday but don't worry about my heart.i am very fine.^ ^), >>But don’t worry about my feelings, I am fine about future, about job and so on. >>We also talked about our future, about our job and so on. while my friend went to toilet, i just stared out of window. >>When my friend went to the restroom, I stared out the window

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