surprising.2

2010-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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at that moment, someone touched me. i was very surprised. because there were pantalis and my friend. pantalis is a guy who work in our company actually his job is a investor. he invests the ship. he came from Greece. and he can speak english very well. he's very naughty and also kind. so my friend i had a conversation in English last night. it was very fantastic. so kindly he took us at home very safety. and we make a another meeting with him near the day.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It’s nice to know that you had a great time last night. And you know what, it is actually helpful that he joined you and your friend. That way, you were able to apply what you learned from our class. Okay we will talk about this later. See you. Lei J   at that moment, someone touched me. >>correct i was very surprised. because there were pantalis and my friend. >>I was very surprised to see my friend with a pantalis pantalis is a guy who work in our company actually his job is a investor. >>Pantalis is someone who works in the company as an investor he invests the ship. >>he invests with ships he came from Greece. >>correct and he can speak english very well. >>correct he's very naughty and also kind. >>he’s very naughty and kind too. so my friend i had a conversation in English last night. >>So me and my friend had to converse in English last night it was very fantastic. >>correct so kindly he took us at home very safety. >>Afterwards, he safely took us home and we make a another meeting with him near the day. >>and one of this days, we set up a meeting with him

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