Surveillance cameras
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I think surveillance cameras should be required in places that care for animals. Some surveillance cameras can prevent kind of abuse or mistreatment of animals.
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Hello, Gi [이름]!
I agree with you! I believe that if people know there are surveillance cameras, they are less likely to commit abuse or mistreatment. They will understand that recorded videos can be used as evidence against them.
- T. Caitlyn
I think surveillance cameras should be required in places that care for animals.
>> CORRECT
Some surveillance cameras can prevent kind of abuse or mistreatment of animals.
>> Surveillance cameras can prevent some kinds of abuse or mistreatment of animals.
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