suspension of water supply.
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good morning. lei.
i want to discuss about water.
several days ago, there was an accident which is suspension of water supply. i recoginized it when i had prepared for working. i tried to wash my hair. but the water did not supply. wow.
i think my mom didn't check the water famine information. but during the early moring there have been accident at water services. so the water services didn't work.
the problem continued for 2 days.
without water, i was not able to take a shower and was not able to use a toilet at home.
fortunately, i could use water at work place.
thru this accident i realized the inconvenience from water famine.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It's sad to hear your story about water famine. It is really frustrating when that happens. I hope that the problem will be fixed as soon as possible. We'll talk about it later during our class. See you!!
Lei :-)
good morning. lei.
>>correct!!i want to discuss about water. >>correct!!
several days ago, there was an accident which is suspension of water supply.
>>several days ago, there was an accident which caused the suspension of water supply in our area.
i recoginized it when i had prepared for working.
>>I thought about it when I was preparing for work.
i tried to wash my hair.
>>correct!!
but the water did not supply. wow. >>but the water did not flow from the faucet.
i think my mom didn't check the water famine information.
>>correct!!
but during the early moring there have been accident at water services.
>>but this morning , there has been some accidents.
so the water service didn't work.>>correct!!
the problem continued for 2 days. >>correct
without water, i was not able to take a shower and was not able to use the toilet at home. >>correct
fortunately, i could use water at my work place.>>correct
thru this accident i realized the inconvenience from water famine.
>>correct
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