Sweet dreams
학생이 쓴 원문
I had a dream at last night.
The story of dream was that I was on a desert island alone.
As far as I can remember, although I was on a desert island alone,
I wasn't afraid or fearful at all.
Only genial sunshine and calm sea which was emerald snugly wrapped me. Anything didn't intimidate me.
At that place I was very free. I want to have a dream again.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Sounds like you had a good dream.. They say that dreams have meanings and interpretations.. Maybe your dream is a good one and it means good life for you..^^
I had a dream at last night.
>> Correct
The story of dream was that I was on a
desert island alone.
>> Correct
As far as I can remember, although I was
on a desert island alone, I wasn't
afraid or fearful at all.
>>Correct
Only genial sunshine and calm sea which
was emerald snugly wrapped me. Anything didn't intimidate me.
>>Correct
At that place I was very free. I want to
have a dream again.
>>Correct
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