Sweet Potato
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Hi, [이름]!
Oh no! You made me hungry with these kind of foods you mentioned. T_T
I love eating foods with cheese.
Well, it\'s a good thing that your mom takes care of your meal.
She\'s a hands on mom. ^^
I hope you can give me next time. kkk
_Teacher Dianne ^^
I didn\'t have a lunch because I am busy doing my homework.
>> I didn\'t have lunch because I was busy doing my homework.
After phone class my mom gave me a cheese stick with sweet potato.It was delicious.
>> After the phone class my mom gave me a cheese stick with sweet potato and it was delicious.
And I have a dumplings and fruits with my family.Sweet Potato is more delicious than sweet Potato.
>> And I had dumplings and fruits with my family. Sweet potato is more delicious than cheese stick.
There are a lot of cheese food.Cheeseburger,cheese pizza,cheese sandwitches is a typical cheese food.
>> There are a lot of foods that are made up of cheese such as cheeseburger, cheese pizza, and cheese sandwiches. These are typical foods that have cheese.
And I like Cheese Sweet Potato pizza and Bulgogi Pizza.
>> And I like cheese sweet potato pizza and bulgogi pizza.
My family don\'t worry about eggs but I can\'t eat egg in outdoor.
>> My family doesn\'t worry about eggs, but I can\'t eat eggs outside.
There is no egg in Kimchi soup restaurant and there is no egg in Kimrice.
>> There is no egg in Kimchi soup restaurants and there is no egg in Kimrice.
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