sweetest moment
학생이 쓴 원문
a long time ago
as we were walking around heavy drops of rain started to splatter down
we stood motionless no choice
I felt like we were the only ones in the world
it was a lasting memory
강사 첨삭
HAPPY THURSDAY!
This is truly a sweet moment, Mrs. [Name].
I pray one day, I\'ll meet a person who\'ll make my world seem motionless as well.
You have a wonderful day!
~Teacher Eve.
a long time ago
>> Correct!
as we were walking around heavy drops of rain started to splatter down
>> As we were walking around, heavy drops of rain started to splatter down.
we stood motionless no choice
>> We stood motionless, we had no choice.
I felt like we were the only ones in the world
>> Correct!
it was a lasting memory
>> Correct!
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