swimming at the beach
학생이 쓴 원문
I can swim a little bit but I\'m scared water and don\'t go far.
So on the beach I stay by the shallow water.
However, as a child, I used to swim freely with friends
As I got older, I started to fear water and became less fond of swimming.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] Ha!
This practice will go a long way.
I hope you will be consistent with your efforts to develop yourself.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I can swim a little bit but I\'m scared water and don\'t go far.
>> I can swim a little bit but I\'m scared of water so I usually don\'t go far.
So on the beach I stay by the shallow water.
So on the beach I stay by the shallow water.
>> So on the beach, I stay by the shallow water.
However, as a child, I used to swim freely with friends
However, as a child, I used to swim freely with friends
>> However, as a child, I used to swim freely with friends.
As I got older, I started to fear water and became less fond of swimming.
As I got older, I started to fear water and became less fond of swimming.
>> Correct
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