Symphony No.6 'Pathetic'

2011-03-04 · 첨삭 강사 ali

학생이 쓴 원문

I'm a member of an amateur orchestra 'Euphonia', which is one of the club activities in my university. The meaning of 'Euphonia' is a good harmony in Greek. In the orchestra, I play the cello with my friends who can play the violin, viola, flute, trumpet and etc.. Tomorrow, We'll perform Symphony No.6 'Pathetic' which is composed by P.I.Tchikovsky. The piece is very difficult to play so we practiced again and again last winter vacation. I believe the proverb that said "Practice makes perfect". I want to perform the symphony greatly tomorrow.

강사 첨삭

Hi Min Joo! Wow I hope I could play a musical instrument like you do! It뭩 great to hear about your performance and I wish you luck on that! Anyways great job on this composition and see you in class tomorrow! =) -       Teacher Faye   I'm a member of an amateur orchestra 'Euphonia', which is one of the club activities in my university. >>> I'm a member of an amateur orchestra 'Euphonia', which is one of the clubs in my university. The meaning of 'Euphonia' is a good harmony in Greek. >>> The meaning of 'Euphonia' from Greek is good harmony. In the orchestra, I play the cello with my friends who can play the violin, viola, flute, trumpet and etc.. >>> In the orchestra, I play the cello with my friends who play the violin, viola, flute, trumpet and others. Tomorrow, We'll perform Symphony No.6 'Pathetic' which is composed by P.I.Tchikovsky. >>> Tomorrow, we'll perform Symphony No.6 'Pathetic' which was composed by P.I.Tchikovsky. The piece is very difficult to play so we practiced again and again last winter vacation. >>> Correct I believe the proverb that said "Practice makes perfect". >>> I believe in the saying, "Practice makes perfect". I want to perform the symphony greatly tomorrow. >>> Correct >>> OR: I want to perform great in the symphony tomorrow.  

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