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Off-Broadway may have a negative connotation such as not being good enough for Broadway of lacking in popularity or quality. But this is unture entirely. It means basically the accommodation of small theator. Play performed on this theater is more friendly and more experimental. It makes the play more innovative. Comedians like John Leguizamo and Margaret Cho thought one-man show at smaller theator but large theator would drop their attractions. Dear stockholders, Arnold P.Stinson, our vice president of laser research and development, and a close personal friend of mine, passed away trgically last weekend. We extend our heartfelt sympahy to his family and friends. Arnold was an outstanding and personable young executive. He worked in our company for ten years. He was well liked and respected by his acquaintances both inside and outside the company. He will be great missed. Sincerely Alfred P.Smith, President
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A merry Monday to you! Good job [이름]! Keep up the good work and never give up on your dreams. Follow your heart\'s desires.
T. Nica
Off-Broadway may have a negative connotation such as not being good enough for Broadway of lacking in popularity or quality.
>>Off-Brodway may have a negative connotation such as not being good enough for Broadway for lacking popularity or quality.
But this is unture entirely.
>>But this is entirely untrue.
>> But this is not entirely true.
It means basically the accommodation of small theator.
>>It means basically the accommodation of a small theater.
Play performed on this theater is more friendly and more experimental.
>>Correct.
It makes the play more innovative.
>>Correct.
Comedians like John Leguizamo and Margaret Cho thought one-man show at smaller theator but large theator would drop their attractions.
>> Comedians like John Leguizamo and Margaret Cho thought one-man show at smaller theater but large theater would drop their attractions.
Dear stockholders, Arnold P.Stinson, our vice president of laser research and development, and a close personal friend of mine, passed away trgically last weekend.
>> Dear stockholders, Arnold P.Stinson, our vice president of laser research and development, and a close personal friend of mine, passed away tragically last weekend.
We extend our heartfelt sympahy to his family and friends.
>>Correct.
Arnold was an outstanding and personable young executive.
>> Correct.
He worked in our company for ten years.
>>Correct.
He was well liked and respected by his acquaintances both inside and outside the company.
>>Correct.
He will be great missed.
>> He will be greatly missed.
Sincerely Alfred P.Smith, President
>>Sincerely,
Alfred P. Smith
President
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