T-ball contest

2016-11-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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We had a T-ball contest.Third class and seven class have a T-ball match.At first inning my team give 5point to the seven class because of the defense.My team scores 3point next inning.But next inning seven class scored 2more points.I catched the ball and throw it but she didn't catch the ball.My condition was not very well.And I hitted a hit on time.But the ball went to in front of the home.I think I wasn't concentrate because of the cold weather and my long T-shirt.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!   It\'s an exciting activity! But I\'m kinda sad because of your condition. T_T Anyway, I hope that you\'ll have another match so you\'ll have a chance to play better. Thank you for sharing about this. See you tomorrow!   _Teacher Dianne   We had a T-ball contest. >> Correct Third class and seven class have a T-ball match. >> The third class and seventh class had a T-ball match. At first inning my team give 5point to the seven class because of the defense. >> At the first inning my team gave 5 points to the seventh class because of the defense. My team scores 3point next inning. >> My team scored 3 points in the next inning.  But next inning seven class scored 2more points. >> But in the next inning the seventh class scored 2 more points. I catched the ball and throw it but she didn\'t catch the ball. >> I caught the ball and threw it, but she didn\'t catch the ball. My condition was not very well. >> Correct >> Or: My condition was not good. >> Or: My condition was bad. And I hitted a hit on time. >> And then I was able to hit on time. But the ball went to in front of the home. >> But the ball went in front of the home run. I think I wasn\'t concentrate because of the cold weather and my long T-shirt. >> I think I wasn\'t able to concentrate well because of the cold weather and my long T-shirt.

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