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2010-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 lei

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Good morning.lei.~ it's a finally friday. Do have any plan for this weekend? i have to attend my friend's wedding ceremony tomorrow. she lives in seoul. so i have to go to seoul. she is my elementary school friend. i graduated from small village elementary school. and also there were not lots of student. so i could study with the same classmate during the time. we were 21 students. until now, we meet at least one time in a year. she is the first one who is going to get marry among the woman. it will take 4 or 5 hours to get the wedding hall. it's so far from here. but we wil enjoy the trip. after wedding ceremony, we are going to travel in seoul. i am very exciting. ^ ^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! It's nice to see you passing a composition again! Well i guess you will be very busy again this weekend. Well, just have fun girl and enjoy the occasion. Take care!!! See you again on Monday!! Lei :-) Good morning.lei.~ >>correct!!it's a finally friday.  >>It's Friday, finally. Do have any plan for this weekend?>>Do you have any plans for the weekend? i have to attend my friend's wedding ceremony tomorrow.  >>correct!! she lives in seoul.  >>correct!! so i have to go to seoul. she is my elementary school friend. >>correct!! i graduated from a small village elementary school.  >>correct!! and also there were not lots of student.  >>and also there were only limited number of students. so i could study with the same classmate during the time.  >>so I studied with the same students during those times. we were 21 students.  >>there were 21 students in our class. until now, we meet at least one time in a year.  >>up to now, we meet at least once a year. she is the first one who is going to get marry among the woman. >>she is the first woman whoe is going to be married from our class. it will take 4 or 5 hours to get the wedding hall.  >>correct!! it's so far from here.  >>correct!! but we wil enjoy the trip.  >>but I think I will enjoy the trip. after wedding ceremony, we are going to travel in seoul. >>correct!! i am very exciting. ^ ^ >>I am very excited.

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