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학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning.lei.~
it's a finally friday. Do have any plan for this weekend?
i have to attend my friend's wedding ceremony tomorrow. she lives in seoul. so i have to go to seoul. she is my elementary school friend.
i graduated from small village elementary school. and also there were not lots of student. so i could study with the same classmate during the time. we were 21 students. until now, we meet at least one time in a year. she is the first one who is going to get marry among the woman.
it will take 4 or 5 hours to get the wedding hall. it's so far from here. but we wil enjoy the trip. after wedding ceremony, we are going to travel in seoul.
i am very exciting. ^ ^
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
It's nice to see you passing a composition again! Well i guess you will be very busy again this weekend. Well, just have fun girl and enjoy the occasion. Take care!!! See you again on Monday!!
Lei :-)
Good morning.lei.~
>>correct!!it's a finally friday.
>>It's Friday, finally.
Do have any plan for this weekend?>>Do you have any plans for the weekend?
i have to attend my friend's wedding ceremony tomorrow.
>>correct!!
she lives in seoul.
>>correct!!
so i have to go to seoul. she is my elementary school friend. >>correct!!
i graduated from a small village elementary school.
>>correct!!
and also there were not lots of student.
>>and also there were only limited number of students.
so i could study with the same classmate during the time.
>>so I studied with the same students during those times.
we were 21 students.
>>there were 21 students in our class.
until now, we meet at least one time in a year.
>>up to now, we meet at least once a year.
she is the first one who is going to get marry among the woman. >>she is the first woman whoe is going to be married from our class.
it will take 4 or 5 hours to get the wedding hall.
>>correct!!
it's so far from here.
>>correct!!
but we wil enjoy the trip.
>>but I think I will enjoy the trip.
after wedding ceremony, we are going to travel in seoul. >>correct!!
i am very exciting. ^ ^
>>I am very excited.
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