Tabula rasa
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the term Tabula rasa” became famous after J. J. Rousseau used it, who was the writer of the educational novel “Emile”. He referred this term to the infants’ immature state, saying that babies at first are only born as organisms not as human beings, but they are growing up to be human beings only through education.” Likewise, when baby is born, the infant’s mentality is blank like a blank paper, and they are continuously influenced by their surroundings. What were input into results in what they are. Therefore surroundings, so to speak, educational environments are the upmost and decisive elements to shape the personality of a proper human being.Tabula rasa
“Children learn from what they have observed, not from what they are told/taught.” .
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the term Tabula rasa” became famous after J. J. Rousseau used it,
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who was the writer of the educational novel “Emile”.
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>>he wrote the educational novel “Emile”.
He referred this term to the infants’ immature state,
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saying that babies at first are only born as organisms not as human beings,
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but they are growing up to be human beings only through education.”
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Likewise, when baby a is born, the infant’s mentality is blank like a blank paper,
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and they are continuously influenced by their surroundings.
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What were input into results in what they are.
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Therefore surroundings, so to speak, educational environments are the upmost and decisive elements to shape the personality of a proper human being.
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Tabula rasa “Children learn from what they have observed, not from what they are told/taught.” .
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